Sunday, February 17, 2008

Every Girl Should Have One

Arabic

Your movement, as your language;
Hushed like curtains
back-drawn and passed through

Whispered into antechambers
that you've dressed before the dawn
with offerings and incense

or the tap of bare feet
on marble intricate as if
through girded iron interlaced
smoke were woven

and the swish of silk
about your heels

and something carried
high and in your hands.

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...every girl should have one: a poem inspired by her.

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6 Comments:

Anonymous Maria Calvo said...

Wow - I've only ever had rhymes written about me. This is really beautiful and it has so much lusciousness about it (is that a word?).

Lucky you! Smart guy, too!!!!
Maria

Sun Feb 17, 06:10:00 PM  
Anonymous Thomas said...

Beautiful poem - whoever wrote this certainly had his pulse on you :)
Lucky man.
Thomas

Sun Feb 17, 07:22:00 PM  
Anonymous Colleen said...

What a lovely poem - it has a little Ondaatjee feel to it.
Colleen

Mon Feb 18, 05:30:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Maha.. completely unrelated comment.. there was yet another story about a facebook initiated action in Toronto Eaton's centre that got thousands of starngers to work together on a prank (everyone froze in their spot for 5 min.. people around thought tehy went carzy not knowing what was happening). It got me thinking.. Gaza is out of the news again.. can you not start something on facebook (or through a cousin in gaza if you are off it now) to initiate some kind of action on the water issue? My understanding is that while food is very limited and so is elctricity (with all that depends on it), water is the critical problem there with very limited access since Israel cutoff all the stuff needed to purify it (including electricity).. The facebook people seem to be very innovative (I have never been on it).. Maybe they can think of something they can do worldwide to demand that we do not starve 1.5 million people to death!

BB

Tue Feb 19, 08:00:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is such a beautiful poem - how lucky!!!!! I think the most I ever got was something like
Roses Are Red
Lily's not a Rose
So She Can't actually Smell like One

;) -lily

Tue Feb 19, 11:30:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The last two lines speak to your confidence. There's something almost regal about those two lines, majestic really.
x

Tue Feb 19, 03:04:00 PM  

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